Thursday 24 November 2011

My writing exam essay comments


I think that my writing exam, I have done all I can.  The writing exam essay looks really good also.  The only way is to write as much as possible and hopefully complete all four parts of an essay then I know that I have written a whole essay.  It doesn’t really matter too much if the essay is good or bad as long as I try to write more and faster.  By the time I have lots of words and all four parts or are finished.
This shows I have done my best for all essays that I write.  I feel it is really, really good that I study essays, know how to write four parts to finish a whole essay.  Have ideas given and thought of ideas and put all I know or learned about how to write essays together is the most important thing about writing essays.  I thought maybe it was not enough but the teacher already thought may be it was too much. (Photo: RA)

Thursday 17 November 2011

It is inorganic collection time

Every 2 to 3 years there is a time in June or maybe some other month where people put out inorganic rubbish for the Auckland City Council to collect.  The people throw away rubbish that is inorganic and you don’t need or want.  This happens in New Zealand.  All unwanted rubbish will be taken to the landfill. There are always times when some people throw the rubbish out. 
Some people look through the piles and piles of rubbish to see if there are still some rubbish that can be reused or fixed and take home.  This way it is very good for the environment. (Photo: RA)

Friday 11 November 2011

My powerpoint presentation thoughts


I think that my powerpoint presentation, I have done my best.  My powerpoint slide were really good.  I just want to be able to go out there and say it or read it out loud even if I passed or not.  The most important thing is that I have can go out and have confidence to do or try to do the presentation. 

This will make me feel good or really good that when I do things doesn’t matter good or bad just try to have confidence to do things and the result are good or bad is still alright as long as I try to do things get them done and know that I have made achievements or achieve something.  The teacher said that the other students making a lot of noise, doing other things and also being noisy and going in and out and even just too much things, being distracting is very distracting and send them all outside to other places.